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First, the this I would add to make this piece more interesting is some atmospheric perspective, which means just lowering the contrast, saturation of the trees in the back and adding some of the blue color of the sky to them. Also, I think you don't need to over-render your piece, otherwise it'll look dead! Leave some looseness in it, some gestural brush strokes, suggest something to the viewer. And also, respect your selling point: if its the dragon, add more contrast to it and add a more extreme foreground element: doing that, you'll have more depth and you can help tell the story by using hints to locate the observer: is he hidding behind a tree? etc.
Overall, very nice composition and texture! Congrats!
First of all, wow, congratulations this is beautiful, but i may be a little biased since this is the kind of art i love.
There is no point pointing out what you did right, because i'd be here all day so i will cut straight to the things i personally think would add to the piece.
The bridge seems to be the weak point of the piece, that and the perspective on the river of the left of the bridge. it almost feels like the water there is higher than the ground near the lady.
Apart from that, this is amazing, really well done
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